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poems that do make us dream ....
12/12/2006 1:18 PM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

hi to all and do wish that u enjoy the poem and of course why not post a poem that means something for u .... thanks friends and do wish u the best keep smiling .....
LOVED BY UR EYES ........ THE LOVE LETTER ..........

you know that feeling when you look into their eyes and you know their the one for you that they truly care and would do anything to protect you and they want to give you the world you know that feeling when you see them laugh and you know they enjoy being with you that they truly want to spend their time with you and they want to hang on to every word you say you know that feeling when your in the arms of that one special person and you feel so safe that they want to make you smile if you know these feelings then you have found that one special person for you so dont ever let them go .
how can I tell you what I feel for you ? when I think of you my feelings twist inside as if someone s fist reached in and grabbed a few and turned and turned them tight and tangled Ive tried somehow to say you re the sun in my sky the wind that takes me where I want to go the sweet incense that makes me feel so high that loving you seem s all I need to know but it all sticks in my throat ! it sounds too cute empty as a wrinkled paper bag you wont believe it ! better I stay mute than ofter you cliches that make you gag and yet i wish to tell you my love if only love its own locks would remove !
beautiful eyes beautiful face Im shy to talk with you you re are the eagle I must watch no matter what I do you re the beauty wild and free the mistress of my eyes rolling through exultant air alone in pristine skies I would take you for my own could I but have your wings could I but go where night begins and frozen sunlight sings could I but have you for my love how might we fly together !
but I must watch you from below and long for you forever but I must be the one below and long for you forever everything I feel inside is sweet you make me love so deep im lost without you , you are my dreams its beautiful what we have its a special thing I owe you for showing me that love is real take all im going to give to you if your the one for me now that i have you there i wont ever let you leave .
I love the way you make me smile and make me so happy its hard to believe that I got you but I know that love I feel for u is real I hope that things will never change and if they do my love for you will always be the same and true .
reach out and hold my hands walk with me to our fantasy land show me the love you can give dont hold back you dont have to pretend open your soul to me let me live in the depth of ur heart promise me i will always be there despite when we are miles apart wrap me in your loving arms I want to feel your breath on my skin make me melt right in to you let me realize you are meant for me kiss me now till i feel you in my blood give me the sensation found so rare drown me in your eyes till I cant fell no more give me the passion I want so much warmth of your love that I always long for give me wings of love to make me fly let me soar above higher and higher show me heaven here on earth come on closer and feed my DESIRE ........

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12/12/2006 1:44 PM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

lost words ......

I have nothing left Nothing to give Since I don t have you Why Should I live
The words you say Conflict with the beat I look at your eyes so warm so sweet
I m Sorry my feelings for you have changed Is what you said
I feel so alone so lost I feel like I m dead
When you told me you liked me All the glory rose to my heart
Yes you were right you tore me apart I told you I hated you
But deep down In my heart I don t I can t feel your heart If It just Won t
I told you I didnt like you But what I told you was a lie
I can t tell you how I feel you made me cry Why does it hurt so much
You Hurt me I want you so bad But you took my love for granted
Shattered my heart and made me sad I wish you would know how I feel
I wish you would come back I would make it right I would make it real
I just want to grab you and make you see Just how much I need you here with me
I still remember that day When you left my world
And you took my heart away I still remember when you kissed my lips
When I pretended to be asleep My love 4 you is so strong so deep
You took my hand and held it tight I wanted it to last but it ended that night
I miss you talking to me i miss your smile and all our flirting
You hurt me so much Now I m Still hurting
My heart was broken
By the squeeze of your soft hand My heart is buried deep down in the sand
I look at you across the room My heart is shedding its pedals
On top of love s tomb
When you broke up with me You Had no explanation You were the love of my life
I wanted to take you to my destination You said you were sorry But how could you
With one last kiss You left me too With one last touch We were through
Now I can t tell you my dreams or my life Since you took my heart away from me
And stabbed my heart with a knife Don t you see how much you made me cry
All Because You said Goodbye .......

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12/21/2006 1:11 PM
Yani, 21
Bandung
Indonesia

"I love the way you make me smile and make me so happy its hard to believe that I got you but I know that love I feel for u is real I hope that things will never change and if they do my love for you will always be the same and true ."

nice..so romantic..^^

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12/21/2006 3:02 PM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

thanks Yani xxxxxx keep smiling xxxxx
As I close my eyes and struggle to sleep
Uninvited thoughts pierce into my mind
The realization that I ll never touch your perfect face
Never feel the gentle touch of your finger tips
Only dream of your entrancing embrace
For I can never surrender my love for you
It s locked deep inside my heart
With the key lost in my hurting soul
I can t help but wonder what you truly see
When you look deep within me
As I open my eyes from tired sleep
The cold hard fact of reality penetrates
You will never know your heart belongs to me
And that I belong deep in your arms
How my dreams of us are oh so sweet
The day when I can finally release
All my dreams and all my passions
I hope it travels through your glistening eyes
Entering your innocent soul
That would be my sweet surrender

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1/8/2007 9:03 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

You know how to make me laugh
You know how to make me cry
You are my best friend and I never want to say goodbye.
You are the twinkle in my eye
The starts in the sky
The clouds above
The easy one to love.
You are my best friend
Forever and always
If ever broken
it will be easy to mend.
You help me strive for the best
And forget the rest
You help me to become successful
For you I am always grateful.
You are my best friend
And it is you I'll never forget
But if I do I will regret.
Stay the way you are
And with your attitude
You will succeed and go far.
You are my best friend
And my love for you will never end.

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1/26/2007 10:14 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Would you lie with me, and just forget the world?
Show me,
A love and passion
That tingles my heart and lets my mind wander
Lie with me
Hold me close
Feel me, taste me
Breathe me
Love me
Lie with me
In damp grass
Gazing up at the endless sky
Lose our minds
In the stars and become one under the cover of love
Lay with me
Take me from this place, let me love you
All under these skies
That take a hold of my heart
From which my words
Are written upon the
Dusky clouds above
I was taking a trip, a little journey called life
Facing all my trials and tribulations alone
Content to slay my dragons and face my demons
Then I saw the eyes of passion and grace
Surrounded by your beautiful face
Shot with the thunderbolt of love
I became captivated by all you offer
Afraid to bare my soul, yet drawn to you
Wanting to hold you in my arms that night
Afraid should we not share the same sight
Wandering ever after, my mind filled with you
My heart calling to you, crying out for your love
Unable to take that first step back to you
Finally conquering the fear that gripped me
Your love setting my heart free
Whether near or far I hold you always in my heart
Feeling the love of my twin soul, my partner in life
Amazed at how good my world has become where we are
Knowing that we will always be in love, together
Knowing that this is the love of a lifetime, now and forever

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2/1/2007 5:38 PM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

As I close my eyes and struggle to sleep
Uninvited thoughts pierce into my mind
The realization that I ll never touch your perfect face
Never feel the gentle touch of your finger tips
Only dream of your entrancing embrace
For I can never surrender my love for you
It s locked deep inside my heart
With the key lost in my hurting soul
I can t help but wonder what you truly see
When you look deep within me
As I open my eyes from tired sleep
The cold hard fact of reality penetrates
You will never know your heart belongs to me
And that I belong deep in your arms
How my dreams of us are oh so sweet
The day when I can finally release
All my dreams and all my passions
I hope it travels through your glistening eyes
Entering your innocent soul
That would be my sweet surrender
My heart beats faster when I feel your eyes on me roaming my body like a buyer inspecting his purchase
My breath gets trapped in my throat when I turn and meet your gaze that makes me feel like butterflies flattering in my stomach
My knees buckle when I see your eyes aflame with the passion that you never hide
I want to yell at you for making my mind turn to mush because of your passionate gaze and devilish smile
I want to run from you and hide when you start to approach me like a predator seeking his prey
But I also want to run into your arms and wrap mine around your neck and hold you tight forever to me
So I stand immobile with those two urges reselling in my head waiting for me to choose the winner
But then every thought evaporated from my mind because you have reached me and your closeness steals my concentration and centers it on only one thing YOU
Your touch melts my every protest as if I had any when you gather me in your sweet arms
Your smell of clean warms my insides and makes my mouth water with want
Your warmth heats me and makes me shiver with the pleasure of it as if I m cold
Your breath on my lips boils my blood and inflames my skin with passionate fever
But all these feelings don t compare to the feel of your lips on mine devouring it like a starving woman for a taste of me
As you plunge your tongue into my mouth destroying its only barrier to sweep in to mate with mine while triggering my senses and ends by exploding my desire
And as you sweep me of my feet I have no worries of our suite because I know with a sign of contentment that you re the only one for me
Mine to touch to hold to cherish and to love full heartedly with no worrying thought of rejection

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12/13/2006 8:56 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Winter s Roads
I cannot speak for all who stem
Long roads less traveled as their way
Nor question choices made by them
In days long past or nights long dim
by words they spoke and did not say
Each road is long though short it seems
And credence gives each road a name
Of fantasies sun-drenched in beams
Or choices turned to darkened dreams
To where each road wends just the same
From North to South then back again
I followed birds like all the rest
Escaping nature s snowy den
On roads I ve seen and places been
Forsaking roads that traveled West
This journey grows now to its end
As road reflections lined in chrome
Give way to roads with greater bend
And empty signs that still pretend
They point the way to home sweet home
But all roads lead to where we go
And where we go is where we ve been
So home is just a word we know
That space in time most apropos
For where we want to be again
For even home seems to me
Is still a choice we all must face
From day to day and endlessly
To choose if home is going to be
Another road or just a place........

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12/14/2006 12:13 PM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

It been quite awhile since I last saw her I wonder how her life has been
Mine s been long both good and bad That s what a lifetime often is
I wish she were here to see me How the young man she knew has grown
It never has been easy Without her love I grew alone
Will these feelings ever leave me Do I really want them to
I cling to them so dearly They re all I ve left of you
The letter I sent her The one I wrote through tears I cried
Was returned to me unopened Never seen by her sweet eyes
It told the story of a lifetime One where we d be wed
Everyday with her was heaven At night she led me to her bed
Memories of the past still haunt me They come to me in the night
That dream of us together lingers The one where she is my wife
The depths to which I ve traveled My heart feeling like a stone
The true love that left me That pain I now call home
It travels with me always We re never far apart The winds of change they don t affect it
When a love comes from the heart
So if she s passing my way I hope she ll say hello
It s just her love I wanted A long long time ago
I saw it in her eyes so clear The night she left me There was a love inside of them
Yearning to be free
They closed on me so quickly Leaving not a chance To show her how right she was
When she first asked me to dance
If only I had met her A few years before 'he' did
But destiny stood between us
A curse I could not rid.
Where were the words I searched for The one s I prayed so hard to find
The one s you speak unto an angel When you try to change her mind
Maybe they were lost somewhere Out in time and space To be spoken by another
Who said them in my place
There was an evening long ago She wanted us to become one
I didn t think the time was right And that it should be done
I never knew that chance I had Was going to be my last
To make love unto an angel Who now lives within my past
Another lifetime awaits us Somehow this one our souls did miss
I know we ve both been here before
An angel sealed with a kiss
So if these dreams should come true And our souls again do touch
I hope she can recall the time I loved her very very much

I will seek you in the shadow of the moon the landscape of disgorged thoughts with my battalion of love poems that once i wrote even my words.........

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12/16/2006 1:29 PM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Standing here all on my own watching life go by
taking in those dreadful words a tear drops from my eye
I stood there as i watched you run and waited for the pain
love can be a painful thing you used my love in vain
Why d you leave me here to cry our love had felt so right
why d you go and break my heart just like you did that night
let me kiss your lips once more so I can see it s true
help me see your love is gone that I can t be with you
don t leave me here to fall apart to watch you fade away
tell me how you really feel and why you just won t stay
I never thought I d cry so much I want to see this through
although you ll never feel for me
I always will love you
If ever you shall leave this place I won t forget your precious face
If one day that you shall die wait for me while in the sky
if you ever need to cry
I ll help you find the reason why if ever you re in great despair
Don t forget i ll still be there if love is down and hate is high
i ll make you smile i ll really try
if you want to run away i d run with you for sure
if ever you would get in stirfe
i d sacrifice my very life
if you should lose your angel wings i ll help you fly and drop my things
if you would find it hard to stand i m always there to hold your hand
If i would die i d sit and wait for you upon the golden gate
don t forget my words so true
I ll always be right here for you ......

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12/18/2006 2:25 PM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

I love you for the way you are
Our relationship will go so far
I love you cose you make me smile
You have the best in looks and style
I love you even when we fight
Cose in the dark you are my light
I love we re the perfect match
To you i m totally attached
I love you your always in my dreams
Day or night that s how it seems
I love you and your cute love notes
And how you offer me your coat
I love you you re the one for me
My hearts the lock and yours the key
I love you I m not just saying that
With you i don t put on an act
I love you and the thing you say
And your attitude of come what may
I love you it s happening so fast
Yet i already know it s going to last
I love you and the things you wear
When i need you you re always there
I love you cose when i m feeling low
You make me smile
I love you you ve brought meaning to my life
I can t wait for the day i become your smile
I love you when you call me mad
In the stars our love is written
I love you babe you own my heart
I d die if we were torn apart
I love you cose your sweet and kind
Your eyes always on my mind
I love you you swept me off my feet
And caused my heart to skip a beat
I love you your sent down from heaven
You re my lucky number seven
I love you you re my old school lady
With you i have a special tie
I love you and the hugs you give
I have a reason now to live
I love you I m sure this is fate
A love like this could never wait
I love you I ll always be your man
Cose babe you re my entire world
I love you when you hold my hand
Together forever that s our plan
I love you for how you say my name
To stay with you is my only aim
I love you I m not telling lies
You know it s true look in my eyes
I love you your always by my side
This loves impossible to hide
I love you oh so very much
Especially the way you touch
I love you and your gorgeous face
I ll follow you to any place
I love you you re the only one
This game in love i ve surely won
I love you more than anything
Ill always wear your special ring
I love you Jenny i really do
I love you more and that s the truth!

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12/19/2006 11:30 AM
Alan Patric, 107
London
United Kingdom

Your writings are fantastic,Its a pleasure to read them,Regards Alan

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12/19/2006 11:44 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

thanks for the comment Alan .... wish u a magic week and always the best to u ..... keep smiling friend life is short for regrets ....

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12/19/2006 12:39 PM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Full smooth lips
Each perfectly sculpted
I have dreamt of your kiss for nights with no end
But I never imagined I would actually receive one
I did though
My eyes were heavy with sleep
And I was comfortable in your arms
Your graceful hand gently gripped my chin
I found myself looking at your handsome features with my heart in my throat
Our lips met with such tenderness that I wasn't sure that I was truly awake
Your silken tongue found my own
And together we spun a dance of sweet passion
All I wanted t do was get closer to you
I wanted to press my lips harder and feel your love
Your kisses were shy and sincere
And when you pulled back, I was gasping for breath
Desire had swirled itself low in my belly
Leaving me aching for your lips
After you left,
I tried to sleep
Yet peaceful slumber escaped my grasp
A once far off dream became reality
I no longer wonder what your lips feel like
Now I know what bliss I can receive from your tender kiss
Lips
Your lips have me craving for more
just my desire .................

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12/20/2006 4:19 AM
♥Gone, 28Royal Zorpian
United States

Wow, I really enjoyed reading all of your poems, very nice :)

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12/20/2006 8:48 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

thanks Melissa wish u always the best for u and ur boyfriend xxxxxxxxxx

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12/20/2006 8:51 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Look at the brighter sun today
glowing like a bride
feel these golden rays all the way
shining my pride
wave goodbye to the melting moon
on the other side
could you hear the sound of a flute
coming from my heart deep inside
symphony of passion
surrounding my inner child
these breaths have never been like this
as love has never been so kind
won't you come out of your lonely shell
and on these roses of love, walk with me
allow my shoulder to comfort your head
while i try to make your soul so carefree
wrap your hands around my waist
for that's how i imagined my journey to be
lay down while resting your ears on my heart
and feel the love which in your eyes i could see
fly high with these wings of love while i create
a tale to be remembered forever of me and my fairy
coming from the mountains full of shining stars
and the waterfalls which with you i see so clearly

so walk with me...

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12/21/2006 10:06 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

I know that I should try to find somebody new..
But all I find is myself always thinking of you..
You dont even know it.. And why should you care?
Your happy just pretending that Im not even there..
Forever means nothing if I dont spend it with you..
But theres just nothing more I think I can do..
I try to tell you I love you but you just dont stop to listen..
Then I guess youll never know that Im the one your missin..
Give me just one minute and look into my eyes..
Forget your friends.. Forget the world.. Forget the pain and lies..
Forget about what people say and what other people might see..
All I want you to think about now is what you think of me..
Cause nothing really matters except for the people you love..
And it kills me inside not knowing what you think when your all Im thinking of..
Maybe I am wrong and you really just dont care..
But why sometimes do you act so sweet if no feelings are accually there..
All I want is for you to tell me exactly how u feel..
Id rather be hurt than keep believeing what you say is real..
Wether you tell me you love me or not this will still be true..
Nothing in this whole damn world could keep me from loving you..

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12/22/2006 10:02 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

dance with me :
Come dance with me baby
Let's get hot and sweaty
Move your butt with the beat
Come feel my body heat
Rock my world with your own
Let the dance floor be blown
Bump me onto your soul
Make rhythm our sole goal
When they turn off the lights
And they play that slow song
Grab my waist, hold it tight
Babe nothing can go wrong
Pleasure is in the air
As you smell my soft hair
Closer, closer you move
There's nothing else to prove
We breathe each other's breath
Your absence will be my death
Your touch, your scent lingers
Don't stop playing with my fingers
''Why did you wait for the last dance?
When this will be our only chance
Did I show lack of interest?
You know I liked you best.."
Lightly you touch my cheek
Preventing me to speak
Your skin burns my senses
I've lost all my defenses
You look into my eyes
Ah.. I'm in paradise
You make my spirits rise
Let's make a night that never dies
The tiny space between
Your flush lips and my grin
Goes smaller and smaller...
'Please be a good kisser'
Only an inch away
''Come kiss me now"".. I pray
When dj stopped the song
And all the lights came on..

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12/28/2006 10:14 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Building a castle of words around her heart
every stone in place with thought and care
A strong tower standing above the rolling hills
protecting her from the barrenness
out there
In scarlet velvet she would dream
and escape with the prince to a fantasy of sensuality
beautiful words like mortar
holds together a castle of unreality
In sadness she finds the stones have jagged edges
the castle begins to crumble and fall
in her memory she hears the echo
the echo of them all
The castle lay in ruins now
the stones had not held true
they choked her as she tried to breathe
scarlet velvet faded and worn in tatters at her feet
she would rebuild the castle she really had no choice she would find the stones in the beauty of a silent voice

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12/30/2006 8:27 AM
ღэΛσ7, 107Royal Zorpian
Dun bother stalking me..I'm immune to Haters! =D
United Kingdom

I dont even have to tell you how much I love reading all your poems, Fred. They are awesome and unique on their own too! Well Done!

See..I told you that everyone would love your poem too, didnt I?? *hugs*

Keep writing and dont stop Freddie...this is your thread!! :)

Always ur friend...
ME!

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12/30/2006 8:34 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

thanks angel u are an amazing lady and i do wish u always the best in life :
I've been to the rivers and felt its temperature,and on the ocean shore i sat down,constantly and continually thinking about you,with my face facing up wards,looking at this beautiful star which reminds me of your sweet and precious love,listening to the sounds of sweet melodies been play by the ocean waters,breathlessly contemplating about nature which made it possible for me to love you every day,every minute,every hour,and every second of my life that i live...day by day,the temperature of my sweet love for you increases like the shining pretty star that awakes me every morning with her tender kisses and mightiest touches.if i could,i will give you the world,make you my lovely queen,eagerly giving you my heart,my soul,my spirit,and my all to you.this love that we both share will never stop.o'er how sweet of you to fill me with thy love when am in need of it,and till violets turn blue,and till roses turn blue,i will always love you.

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1/2/2007 9:45 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Forbidden feelings surging through revealing open veins
Unleashing the need of a hunger feeding on the insane
Crossing over between purities and dirty ruby tears
Confused and uncertain as the bloody hands draw near
No innocence to dwell on as midnight comes to be
Misty red confusion reveals nothing there to see
Fire burns a lullaby, the sleeping soul is torn
Childhood turns to stone as another life is born
Confiding in the stars as the blood freezes in flame
The moon slowly crumbles as the sky returns to tame
Broken dreams of long ago removed from remainders of time
Our death brings a gift beyond the quickly fading line
Erasing thoughts of feelings, etched onto the sky in pain
Pushed into eternity, as though to never feel again
Dark and blurry eyes seeing in a crystal vision
The earth turns and the world stills upon the last incision.
Tear drops of love,
Teardrops of hate
Tears of guilt,
The ones I cant escape
I feel as though I am attached to a chain
These tears I cannot maintain
Just kill me right here right now with a stake
If I had a chance my life I would retake
I feel blood and a hole a hole in my heart as skin turns cold
I had a strong feeling that I wouldn t live to be very old
I want to go to Heaven I want to live and breathe
My dreams and goals I still want to achieve
Dont send me to Hell for my sins
That is not the right place for life again to begin.
I promise I ll do no harm to myself nor others
I want to see the life
The life of my family especially my mother
She was so good to me...she doesn t deserve these tears of pain...
These tears of pain I cannot restrain

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1/5/2007 10:07 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

So much time had passed
Until yesterday I saw you
I just knew my love had vanished
Now I know it remains true.
As you slowly glazed into my eyes
From your lips spoke my name
I could see it within your eyes
Tears now flowing like rain.
Finally you realize what you had
And you let it slip away
I can feel your heart breaking
Now you know it was a mistake.
You had a woman that loved you
Cherished you without a doubt
I would have given up everything
To prove what true love was about.
In my heart I'll always love you
You'll forever hold a key
I wish you had realized it sooner
So it could've been you and me.
It could have been a special love
One that others would long for
You held all my dreams
You were the one I adored.
My heart has a missing link
No one else can ever fill
You held the magic of my happiness
My love continues to live.

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1/5/2007 10:07 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Im with you
I look into your eyes and give you a smile
You grab my hand
And tell me "stay for awhile"
Im with you
You pull me closer and your hold grips tighter
I press my lips against yours
And everything seems a bit lighter
Im with you
You lead me to your room
Onto your bed, Im laying over you
My heart begins to race and make a loud "boom"
Im with you
I start kissing you all over and take off your top
You take off mine chlotes
Unzip me with a simple "pop"
Im with you
I feel myself falling into place
Fiting perfectly within you
Intimacy with such grace
Im with you
I feel complete
The high feeling I have is called Love
It's a feeling I want to keep

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1/23/2007 5:22 AM
Leilani, 24
Sacramento, California
United States

Freddie,

Thanks for these wonderful poems.. I love reading them..

take care..

Aloha nui loa,

Leilani

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1/23/2007 9:46 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

thanks Leilani wish u a magic day and that all ur dreams will be true xxx

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12/31/2006 11:16 AM
May Khine, 107
Pretoria
South Africa

OMG! Please stop with all this love stuff..
I was all for it when i started reading but now i feel sick and feel like bleeding..
I don't mean to offend but i've been broken too many times and nothing can mend.
Freddi? You should chill with the love poems.. PLEASE... They're really gorgeous and i appreciate them but its getting tedious!
Anyway.. Happy new year!! =D

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12/31/2006 12:21 PM
ღэΛσ7, 107Royal Zorpian
Dun bother stalking me..I'm immune to Haters! =D
United Kingdom

May Khine.. that's Fred's style of writing and we should try to appreciate it even if some of us (like yourself)feel suffocated by 'too much of loving'.

Freddie is very talented and I can definitely vouch for his writing skills too. I would rather ask you to give him some suggestions as to what kind of poems or writings you would rather like to see him present in the future for a change, rather then to crudely cut him off completely pls?

Freddie is a special person who likes to express his feelings through his writings and he's also a very sensitive person. I would want to see more of his writings on our group as it brightens up the group image and also gives it a variety. I hope that everyone could support that idea too pls.

Thank you & Happy New Year To U Too, May Khine :D

Nishi

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12/31/2006 3:52 PM
May Khine, 107
Pretoria
South Africa

UHM... OK! OK! I'm sorry if i have offended you Freddie.. I've just had a hard time with guys and i was sick of it all.. And as for the variety thing.. I think i' like you to present poems about friendship!! Stuff like guys come and go but friends are forever etc.. I wrote something like at in my journal.
Sorry again and thanks Nishi.
Happy new year!! =D

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1/1/2007 12:50 AM
Graham, 19
Meadow Lake, Saskatchewan
Canada

WOW your poems are amazing I wish i could present my feelings like you can your words are beautiful. keep o writing you are an architect of words. Have a happy new year

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1/1/2007 6:16 AM
ღэΛσ7, 107Royal Zorpian
Dun bother stalking me..I'm immune to Haters! =D
United Kingdom

Hi Graham..thank u for being here.. welcome to my group *hugz* :)

Remember I told u that I would introduce a guy whose a really good writer?? lolzz looks like you found him yourself then! :D Yeah..it's Freddie! Wait till he's back, then u can talk to him and get ideas on improving on your writings too, ok? :))

In the meantime, I hope u would stay and enjoy the group too. Dont forget to start ur own thread of poems ok? ;)

See u later...

Nishi

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1/1/2007 8:19 AM
Graham, 19
Meadow Lake, Saskatchewan
Canada

k for sure will do. and ya you were right he is an amazing writer

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1/8/2007 9:05 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Thank You for always being there.
Thank You for all the times we share.
Thank You for everything You do.
Most of all, thanks for being You.

Thank You for all the talks we have.
Thank You for always making me laugh.
Thank You for always being true.
Most of all, thanks for being You.

Thank You for all the love You give.
Thank You for making it fun to live.
Thank You for the times we've flew.
Most of all, thanks for being You.

Thank You for absolutely everything.
Thank You for all the joy You bring.
Thank You for always helping me through.
Most of all, thanks for being you.

Thank You for always being stood by my side.
Thank You for drying the tears I have cried.
Thank You for being there for the good times too.
Most of all, thanks for being You.

Thank You for always helping me fight.
Thank You for making everything alright.
Thank You for always doing the best You can do.
Most of all, thanks for being You.

Thank You for giving me a certainty in life.
Thank You for seeing me through all the strife.
Thank You for forgiving what I've put You through.
Most of all, thanks for being You.

Thank You for giving friendship like I've never had.
Thank You for the friendship not being a fad.
Thank You for the best friend I love so true.
Most of all, thanks for being You.

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1/9/2007 2:15 AM
Graham, 19
Meadow Lake, Saskatchewan
Canada

WOW!! Another amazing piece you are a master of words. Keep on giving us he pleasure of reading your works. They are brilliant

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1/9/2007 9:46 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

thanks Graham wish u always the best .....
Have you ever fallen so hard
For someone you don’t really know
But the first time you talked to them.
They had you right there at ‘hello’?

Have you ever fallen so hard
For a completely perfect stranger
But you wanted to get to know them
Even though it could put you in danger?

Have you ever fallen so hard
For someone that you never met
But when you started talking to them
You knew it was something you wouldn’t regret?

Have you ever fallen so hard
For someone who can make you fly
By just saying ‘baby, I love you’
And you just know it’s not a lie?

Have you ever fallen so hard
For someone so perfect
Who’s like an angel to you
And treats you with so much respect?

Have you ever fallen so hard
Or as fast as you can blink, so quick
But there’s something about her
And you two just automatically click?

Baby, I’ve fallen so hard
You’re my angel from above
God sent you to me
To care and to love

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1/10/2007 8:34 AM
freddie, 28
Norwich
United Kingdom

Are We Still Friends?

I could have held you all night long,
I could have laid next to you forever,
But then I know tomorrow soon would come,
And still we couldn't be together . . .

I went against what my head was saying,
and followed my heart through,
And instead of quitting while I was ahead,
I started falling in love with you

We had so much fun together,
the memories we made so great,
all those nights laughing and smiling,
staying up so late.

As the snow falls on the sidewalks,
I know this too will pass,
for feelings are like the seasons changing,
and one season never lasts.

So, I know this must stop now,
and tomorrow soon will come,
as we walk away and never look back,
as our warm feelings become numb.

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