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11/29/2008 12:21 PM The light of life (8 Comments)

missnature

The light of life

The lake lays still in pale moolight,
Deep shadows dance and sway,
A fog rolls in to soften night,
Then a sprite comes out to play.

A tune dips soft and light,
Upon the breeze it floats,
Following a hauting melody,
With ancient history it toats.

All stop their motion,
All sound comes to an end,
All life seemes to pause,
All seems to but then.

Twirling to the beat,
A grace beyond compair,
A single sprite dipes and sways,
Until the forest's eyes turn to stare.

More appear from rock, tree, and water,
Colors deep and pale,
Dancing to the music's beat,
Even as moonlight starts to fail.

Joining hands as music speeds,
Their voices raised in song,
They light the magical path in life,
For those who have righted a wrong.

11/29/2008 12:42 PMRe: The light of life

PROMISEYOU
ღ®õ®õ Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 40, Warsaw, Poland
i hope this life be like this poem
i hope moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee
all world together
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cool sis

11/29/2008 1:00 PMRe: Re: The light of life

missnature
ღnatureღ Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 28, in God hands, Romania
glad u like it sis
God protect us all

11/29/2008 1:07 PMRe: Re: Re: The light of life

PROMISEYOU
ღ®õ®õ Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 40, Warsaw, Poland
yesssssssssss
good looking us

12/3/2008 6:22 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: The light of life

thedreamz5
♠raaj Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 27, Dhaka, Bangladesh
yaa

12/3/2008 6:24 PMRe: The light of life

thedreamz5
♠raaj Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 27, Dhaka, Bangladesh
briliant atepmt
i like ur text sis getty
i hope we all together n
make our dreamz true

12/4/2008 6:28 AMRe: Re: The light of life

missnature
ღnatureღ Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 28, in God hands, Romania
we have to my sweetie bro raaj

5/3/2009 7:12 PMRe: Re: Re: The light of life

damadeluna
ღ-ღLÅÐ Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 108, Syrian Arab Republic
beautiful my sis ... so true the words... love you and miss you muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

5/3/2009 10:48 PMRe: Re: Re: Re: The light of life

thedreamz5
♠raaj Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian 27, Dhaka, Bangladesh
thanks
n hope.. we makes a good world---may b thats our dreramz,, but i beliv some day shuld come when joy of light , true.., etc........
we r jast pray n waiting to c..
we jast putiing that tree may b come some day its bring us good fruit in future
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