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OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th

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OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/21/2008 12:33 PM
Kevin Scott, 42
Florida
United States

Contest rules: Here are THE GUIDELINES:
You will be given phrase. You must write a poem CONTAINING that phrase. Post your entry before or on the closing date...After that date, the writer who impressed the host most gets to choose the next phrase and the next winner, and so on.
If you don't want to be chosen to host a phrase/topic, mark your poem JFTLOI (Just For The Love Of It.)
the phrase of the week is...
"Warm Winds Caress the Slumbering Pines"
Good luck everyone
hoping to see your posts
PS April is National Poetry Month in the US

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/21/2008 1:21 PM
anu, 107
India

key kevin congrats
nw this is another tough line *worried*
hmm will try to come up with something*gulp*

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/21/2008 1:55 PM
Kevin Scott, 42
Florida
United States

go with a nature theme it will come to you...tall trees disturbed by the breeze, a light scent of rain and warm air turning cool before the storm, quiet consumes the morning..stuff like that

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/21/2008 1:34 PM
Jessie, 66Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian
Santa Lucia.
Malta

YES KEVIN IT IS PERFECT I HAVE SET IT TO STICKY TO BE A HEADLINE.I LOVE THE PHRASE.

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/22/2008 3:12 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

Congrats, Kevin, I loved your poem. This looks like a fun phrase,
:) Sheri

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/22/2008 1:01 PM
Kevin Scott, 42
Florida
United States

thanks

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/22/2008 3:33 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

Warms Winds


caress the slumbering pine
boxes of our forgotten world
we disdain for electron worlds
seen Maxx-D surround and blasted
free of life, scented by
dust storms blown by ripping tractors
thundering booms of sonic escape
and the humid cling of reflected
back world seas globally warmed

caress the slumbering pines
with symbolic runes, caress the lands
growing green with our food,
caress the skies that furnish our air
paint in snow falling like glitter
paint in the ice, the chill,
paint in blue noses sniffing methane
paint in false furs to wrap home
paint in the the winds following rain

no matter the eon the past or future
no matter the ion solar wind or plasma storm
no matter no matter to be had
when we blast free of our home
turn inside ourselves like children
returned to the universal womb
our arrogance claims our finger pinch
is the wind of change needed
to create cataclysm in a world where unseen


Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/22/2008 6:30 AM
suramya, 38
New Delhi
India

Wow what a turn u give to phrases...really liked this poem ...Yes you are right about human indifference and arrogance...a chill warning a heart warming poem!

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/22/2008 6:31 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

thanks, suramya--it was different for me. I never know what will tumble out, lol
:) Sheri

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/22/2008 1:01 PM
Jessie, 66Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian
Santa Lucia.
Malta

OH SHERI THIS IS LOVELY SUCH VIVID DESCRIPTIONS , I LOVE IT.I AM GOING TO SUBMIT ONE JFTLOI.VERY GOOD SHERI AS USUAL.

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/23/2008 12:41 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

thank you Jessie, I can't wait to see yours :) Sheri

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/22/2008 1:03 PM
Kevin Scott, 42
Florida
United States

OK A statement made. Very nice. thought provoking

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/23/2008 12:42 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

Not very green and happy but oh, well. :) Sheri

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4/24/2008 11:58 AM
Kevin Scott, 42
Florida
United States

I am glad it wasnt...a poem should be thought provoking and yours does just that....

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4/25/2008 7:10 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

thank you! :) Sheri

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/22/2008 4:41 PM
anu, 107
India

loved it sheri
as usual u r an awesome riter
hope to rite like u 1 day
...............solitude foreber me forver you..........

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/23/2008 12:42 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

thank you anu, can't wait to see yours :) Sheri

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/23/2008 3:40 AM
Vignesh, 19
Mumbai
India

*to create cataclysm in a world where unseen!!*
Simply OSM..!!

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/25/2008 7:12 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

Oh, that's a cute way to abbreviate awesome, you know you're old when you type it all out. Thank you, Vignesh.
:) Sheri

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/24/2008 10:36 AM
RHEY W, 75Royal Zorpian
Margate, Florida
United States

WOW ... Sheri does "it" again; congratulations SHERI!

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/25/2008 7:14 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

Thank you, Rhey. Dare I hope to see yours below? I'll look.
:) Sheri

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/25/2008 7:50 PM
shahid, 23
New Delhi
India

i someimes feel i must keep mum and just listen to your flowing intense ideas,,but suddenly there appears a name
Sheri Fresonke Harper and i smile saying, well next week the magic wil continue...i liked the poem and the streamlined flow especially that is rare from you,,,and i feel enlightened to hvae yu in the forum sheri! :)
papaya seed
shahid

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/28/2008 5:45 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

Fine words, Shahid--you made today's story because I needed a male Indian name fast. I send it to you when I complete it.

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4/28/2008 5:53 AM
shahid, 23
New Delhi
India

yahhhh! thats great :) ...what u writing these days?

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4/29/2008 8:37 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

endlessly my novel--mostly sf :) Sheri

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/23/2008 5:21 AM
lalainepadil, 27
Philippines

HI nice phrase to think about... wanna post something for it soon

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/23/2008 10:04 AM
aPpLέ. Ҝ, 21Verified Zorpian
Dar es Salaam
Tanzania

Arent u SIr??? if u are, know that u are missed
ANyway, congrats dear
i wil try to pull myself together and come up with smthng byutiful and meaningful :)
Kis kis

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/24/2008 5:28 AM
suramya, 38
New Delhi
India

JFTLOI
Trek
So many summers passed,since first I saw these cliffs with you
And the rivulet rushing down these rocks
All this wealth of green
The serene sky a brilliant blue
Warm winds still caress these slumbering pines
The snow still kisses the peaks in streaks of whites and brown
Your footsteps no longer fall with mine
You are not here to point out that robin,this rhododendron
As I walk up the steep path
I measure what I have and have not
The view takes my breath away
And memory,regret and pain
Nostalgia fades to give way
to the majesty of the mountain
The path is tough but clearly marked
All that I need,I have
Like every campsite
And every little step in life
This too shall pass,somehow
A full deep breath.Live in the now.

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/24/2008 7:24 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

why oh, why JFTFOI? Lovely and climbing up to that new awareness. Well done suramya.

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/24/2008 8:05 AM
suramya, 38
New Delhi
India

Thanks sweet Sheri!:-)

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/24/2008 12:00 PM
Kevin Scott, 42
Florida
United States

Lost love...tragedy....memories...nature......very nice thank you for your poem

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/25/2008 11:52 AM
anu, 107
India

ahh fantastic loved it a lot

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/25/2008 12:34 PM
suramya, 38
New Delhi
India

Thank you dear!

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/25/2008 7:54 PM
shahid, 23
New Delhi
India

the time shal pass
while th campfire lasts
and nostalgia's failure will be anothr past..
too good a poem and too good words..slightly complicated at times but reasoj good enuf fr a reader liek me to read twice..good work. and btw, great to see poem frm yu after long

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4/26/2008 6:18 AM
suramya, 38
New Delhi
India

Praise from a poet like you feels good:-)

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4/26/2008 7:11 PM
shahid, 23
New Delhi
India

praising poets like you is pleasure!

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4/25/2008 8:13 PM
Jessie, 66Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian
Santa Lucia.
Malta

THIS IS LOVELY SURAMYA , IT IS SO WELL DEVELOPED WHY DID YOU DO IT JRTLOI? I LOVED THE LINE"THE SNOW STILL KISSES THE PEAKS IN STREAKS OF WHITES AND BROWN "

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Re: Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April
4/27/2008 9:22 AM
suramya, 38
New Delhi
India

Thanks Jessie love!

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Re: Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/27/2008 6:50 AM
Vignesh, 19
Mumbai
India

such a nice wrk nd still JFTLOI...??
luved da way itzz described!!:)

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4/27/2008 9:23 AM
suramya, 38
New Delhi
India

Thanks Vignesh!

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/25/2008 7:46 PM
shahid, 23
New Delhi
India

hie kevin
congrats on winning and i nevr knew that the new thread is already there...would have missed the phrase...cheers!

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/28/2008 12:41 PM
Kevin Scott, 42
Florida
United States

Everyone made this tough. I have choosen this one by Vignesh for a simple reason IT took me to the train and I sat and watched her. I saw the struggle and the tragic outcome....Dishonorable Death!
Well done.
To everyone else I will simply say I fully enjoyed your written words and thoughts. Well done to you.

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Re: OK New Line for a POEM From April 21th to April 27th
4/22/2008 1:21 PM
Jessie, 66Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian
Santa Lucia.
Malta

Scenic,Mountains
THIS IS A JFTLOI

THE LAST GOODBYE.
Up there
On the mountain high
You can relish more..
The beauty of the sky.
And down below
you visualise the flow,
Of humanity that goes by.
Here in this absolute silence
broken only , by the fluttering
of the roaming eagles...
Gliding gracefully,
over the peaks
of the rugged rocks...
Showing that they are mighty
and not weak.
The kings of birds, and of the sky
hovering and seeking as they go by.
soaring high, together, sharing and caring
Up there so high!
Down in the valley, I can nearly feel
the warm winds, caressing the pines
which grow at the sides of the mountain
Making the landscape, look so fine.
Watching all this, makes me feel bad
It reminds me of the love I once had
And of that someone, who made me cry
As he whispered his last good bye
Thus the reason for being sad.
Yet all this grandeur, reminds me
that there is someone who cares from above
Someone always ready, to give me his love
The steadfast love of the Lord.
jessie.....©,,,,,21/04/08

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4/22/2008 4:42 PM
anu, 107
India

nice 1*smiles*
..........solitde forever me forever you..................

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4/22/2008 9:00 PM
Jessie, 66Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian
Santa Lucia.
Malta


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THANK YOU ANU ARE YOU GOING TO SUBMIT , IT IS NOT HARD THIS TIME AND LAST ONE WAS A LOVELY GOOD POEM. I WISH YOU LUCK,

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4/23/2008 12:46 AM
Sheri, 66Royal Zorpian
Renton, Washington
United States

ooh, awesome, takes from the personal to the eternal:) Sheri

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4/25/2008 8:19 PM
Jessie, 66Royal Zorpian Verified Zorpian
Santa Lucia.
Malta

THANK YOU SHERI, I LOVED YOURS TOO IT IS SO EASY FLOWING, I WISH YOU LUCK SHERI

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4/23/2008 4:58 AM
suramya, 38
New Delhi
India

sweet poem...like the last line v much Jessie!

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