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Suno
4/17/2008 6:21 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

Aj suna raha hoon mein kahani apnay payar ki
Naa Iqrar kia us nay naa khtum howi had meray intazar ki
koshish jo ki jannay ko hal-e-dil un ka
to saj gaye mehfil behas-o-takrar ki
Kya Guzri Meray dil pay wo kya janay
jis nay khabar bhi naa li meray haal ki

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Re: Suno
4/17/2008 6:26 PM
mariya, 22
mirpur
Pakistan

very nice topic

SUNO,,,
RIFAQATUN KE SILSILAY NA TOOT JAYEIN KAHIN,,
KABHI KABHI MILNE KA SILSILA RAKHNA,,
MAANA KE AUR LOG BHI HAIN QAREEB TERE,
MAGAR MERI ZAAT KO AURUN SE JUDA RAKHNA...!

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Re: Re: Suno
4/19/2008 6:09 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

janay kitni dare tak sochta raha ho gaa qudrat ka hath
pehlay banaye teri ankhay phir bani yeah kaiynat

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Re: Suno
4/18/2008 6:51 AM
Raja, 22Verified Zorpian
Rawalpindi
Pakistan

dil k bazaar ma dolat nahe dekhi jaati
pyaar ho jaye to sorat nahe dekhi jati

ik tabassum pe do alam ko nichawar ker do
maal acha ho to qeemat nahe dekhi jaati

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Re: Re: Suno
4/18/2008 9:12 AM
mariya, 22
mirpur
Pakistan

us ne kaha nam kya he tumhara
maine ne kaha apnay dil se puch lo
Us ne kaha mujh se tumhain kitna pyar hai
Maine kaha sitaron ka koi shumar hai
Usne kaha kon hai tumhain bht azeez
Maine kaha dil pe jisay ikhtiar hai
Us ne kaha kon sa tohfa hai manpasand
Maine kaha woh sham jo ab tak udhar hai
Us ne kaha khizan main mulaqat ka jawaz
Maine kaha qurb ka matlab bahar hai
Us ne kaha mujhay ya

Us ne kaha mujhay yakien aye kaise
Maine kaha mera naam aitbar hai

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Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/18/2008 9:37 AM
Raja, 22Verified Zorpian
Rawalpindi
Pakistan

us ne kaha hasti teri ? ma ne kaha chehra tera
usne kaha pir naisti? ma ne kaha perda tera

us ne kaha sahm e bala ? ma ne kaha gaiso tere
us ne kaha subh e safa? ma ne kaha chehra tera

us ne kaha jana mera ? me ne kaha meri ajal
us ne kaha pir zindagi ? ma ne kaha ana tera

us ne kaha kia kaam hay ? ma ne kaha khidmat teri
us ne kaha kia naam hay ? ma ne kaha banda tera

us ne kaha kis se gila? ma ne kaha taqdeer se
us ne kaha taqdeer kia? ma ne kaha mansha tera

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/27/2008 12:58 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

jab say tum nay mujhay deewana bana rakha hai
sang her shaks say apnay hatho mein utha rakha hai
us kay dil pay bhi kari ishq ki guzri ho gee
naam jis nay bhi mohabbat ka saza rakha hai
ab meri deed ki duniya bhi tamashaye hai
tu nay kya mujh ko mohabbat bana rakha hai

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/27/2008 5:57 PM
Raja, 22Verified Zorpian
Rawalpindi
Pakistan

hasnay nahe deta kabhi ronay nahe deta
ye dil to koi kaam bhi honay nahe deta
tum maang rahay ho mere dil se meri khvahish
bacha to kabhi apne khilonay nahe deta

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Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/18/2008 6:47 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

NIce
udasi-e-sama say dil bhut akaila tha
prinda sham kay pul per khamosh betha tha
makan say mujhay kya lena maka tumhain mubarik
magar yeah ghas wala reshmi Qaleen mera hai

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: Suno
4/18/2008 7:52 PM
Aarzoo, 20
Lahore
Pakistan

SUNOO aisa nahi krty
jis dil main rhty hain osay tora nhi krty
bina jis kay na je paain osay chora nahi krty
sunoo kuch dair ruk jao koi tadbeer kr lain gay
jo saray khwaab daikhin hain unhain tabeer kr lain gay
Bina tery ya jivan hm kaho kaisy bitain gay
sunoo jb drd hoga to trap kr mar he jain gay...

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Re: : Suno
4/19/2008 5:59 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

Suno!
Abhi Iqraar Nahin Karna
Abhi Dharkanen Murtaaish Hain
Abhi Khamsoh Rehna
Abhi Kuch Nahin Kehna
Abhi Kuch Waqt Do
Main Sochna Chahti Hu
Inn Kuch Lamhon Ko Rokna Chahti Hu
Abhi Inn Sitaaron Ko Chhuna Chahti Hu
Jo Pehley Aasmaan Ka Saman Lagtey They
Aur Aj Meri Aankhon Main Jagmaga Rahen Hain
Abhi Iqraar Nahin Karna
Abhi Khamosh Rehna
Abhi Apney Inn Khamosh Labon Ki Bila Wajeh Muskrahat
Ka Sabab Khojna Chahti Hu
Abhi Baar-E-Haya Se Palken Larzaan Hain
Kaisey Tumhaari Nigaahon K Mafhoom Samajh Paaun Ga
Abhi Is Kaar-E-Giraan Se Guraezaan Hu
Mohabbat Jo Wahi Ban Kar Utar Raha Hai Dil per
Lafzon Ki Zaroorat Se Lagta Hai Bae Ehtiaaj
Suno! Abhi Is Ilhaam Ko Jaari Rehney Do
Suno !
Abhi Iqraar Nahin Karna
Suno!
Abhi Kuch Nahin Kehna
Suno!
Abhi Khamosh Rehna
Suno!
Abhi Iqraar Nahin Karna...!

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Re: : Suno
4/20/2008 5:04 AM
Raja, 22Verified Zorpian
Rawalpindi
Pakistan

Suno Larki ..
Abhi Tum Ishq Mat Karna
Abhi Guriya Se Khelo Tum
Tumhari Umar Hi Kya Hai
Faqt Satra Baras Ki Ho
Abhi Masoom Bachi Ho
Nahin Maloom Abhi Tum Ko
K Jab Yeh Ishq Hota Hai
To Insaan Kitna Rota Hai
Sitaray Toot Jatay Hain
Saharay Choot Jatay Hain
Abhi Tum Nay Nahin Dekha
K Jab Sathi Bichartay Hain
Tu Kitna Dard Milta Hai
K Har Furqat K Mousam Main
Hazaron Ghum Ubhartay Hain
Hazaron Zakhm Khultay Hain
Suno Larki ....

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/20/2008 5:06 AM
Raja, 22Verified Zorpian
Rawalpindi
Pakistan

Mujhay yaad koi dua nahee meray humsafar abi soch le
Tu meri jabeen pe likha nahee maray humsafar abi soch le

Abi rasta bi hai dhool main abi faida bi hai bhool main
Abi mujh ko tujh se gila nahee meray humsafar abi soch le

Main janam janam se naraz hoon main janam janam se udaas hoon
Main kahbi bi khul ke hansa nahee meray humsafar abi soch le

Tu hai khawab khawab pukarta meri ankh main nahee ashk bi
Main muddaton se jia nahee meray humsafar abi soch le

Tujhay khushbowoon ki hai arzoo tujhay roshni ki hai justjo
Main hawa nahee dayya nahee meray humsafar abi soch le

Tujhay ansowoon ka pata nahee tujhay ratjagoon ka guman nahee
Tujhay is se agay pata nahee meray humsafar abi soch le

Kaheen chhoot sakta hai darmyaan na zameen milay gi na asmaan
Tujhay rastay ka pata nahee maray humsafar abi soch le

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Re: Suno
4/18/2008 12:15 PM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

very nice,HASSAN
Tumhain Dil Say Bhulatay Hain Tu Aankhain Khoob Rooti Hain,
Dard Dil Main Jagatay Hain Tu Aankhain Khoot Rooti Hain..
Tumharay baad Chahat K Sabhi Punchi Uray Janaan,
Kahin Bhi Dil Lagatay Hain Tou Aankhain Khoob Rooti Hain..
Teri Tasweer, Adhooray Khat Tu Jala Diyey Hum Nay,
Ab Paani Pay Naqsh Banatay Hain Tu Aankhain Khoob Rooti Hain..
Ghata Aawargi Main Jab Siyah Choola Pehanti Hai,
Parinday Jab Satatay Hain Tou Aankhain Khoob Rooti Hain..
K Jab Bhi Shaam Dhalti Hai Meri Qismat K Sab Taray,
Falaq Par Jagmagatay Hain Tu Aankhain Khoob Rooti Hain..
Sard Tareek Raaton Main Siyah Sawan Ki Barish Main,
Dard Jab Muskuratay Hain Tu Aankhain Khoob Rooti Hain..
Sahil Ki Woh Mitti K Jis Pay Khoon Hathoon Say,
Wafa Likh Kar Mitatay Hain Tou Aankhain Khoob Rooti hian..

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Re: Re: Suno
4/18/2008 6:27 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

hmmm Thanks Khatija
tum jo youn chehray pay apni zulfain girati ho
is ada say tum mujhay ghayyal ker jati ho
eK hussan tujh ko khuda nay khoob diya ho
us per youn sharma ker pagal ker jati ho

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Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/19/2008 11:15 AM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

Dil ki chokhat pe ek deep jala rakha hai
Dil ki chokhat pe ek deep jala rakha hai
Tere laut aane ka imkaan saja rakha hai
Rooth jaate ho to kuch aur haseen lagte ho
Hum ne yah soch ke hi tum ko khafa rakha hai
Tum jise rota hua chhorr gaey the ek din
Hum ne us shaam ko seeney se laga rakha hai
Chein lene nahin deta yeh kisi tor mujhe
Teri yaadon ne jo toofaan utha rakha hai
Jaane waale ne kaha tha ke woh laut aaey ga zaroor
Ek isi aas pe darwaaza khula rakha hai
Tere jaane se jo ek dhool uthi thi ghum ki
Hum ne us dhool ko aankhon mein bassa rakha hai
Mujh ko kal shaam se woh bohat yaad aane laga
Dil ne muddat se jo ek shaks bhula rakha hai
Aakhri baar jo aaya tha mere naam
Mein ne is khat ko Dil se laga rakha hai

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/19/2008 2:09 PM
mariya, 22
mirpur
Pakistan

very nice hassan & my dear sis
******************************
Sochta rahta hoon tu aaye gi keh nahin??
Kiya tu bhi mujhe itna hee chahey gi jeetna mei tujhe chahta hoon???
Tujhe pane ki arzoo mei mar he na jao
Tujhe eik bar chooney key liya jeeta hoon
Kitne laamhe, kitney rose guzr gaey, magr tu ne na aana tha, na tu aaye.
Ay bewafa, kiya mera piyar hee kam tha terey liye??
Kiya tujhe koi aur bhi itna chatha hai???
Mere arzoo, mere jaan, aaj bhi tera intizaar hai.
Aaj bhi dil tere liye beqaarar hai.
In darkanoon mei rahneen wali kab aaye gi tu???

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/19/2008 6:11 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

jee chahta hai kay apna bana loon tujh ko
na dekh lay koi ankho mein chuppa loon tujh ko
bhut mangi hai duaen tab jaa kay kahi tujhay paya
naa cheen lay koi tujh ko sanso mein basa loon tujh ko
jo ek bar parh ker phir kabhi naa bhoolay
a meri jaan wo tehreer bana loon tujh ko

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/19/2008 6:21 PM
mariya, 22
mirpur
Pakistan

baat karni mujhe mushkil kabhi aisi to na thi
jaisi ab hai teri mahafil kabhi aisi to na thi
le gaya cheen ke kaun aaj tera sabr-o-qarar
beqarari tujhe ai dil kabhi aisi to na thi
chashm-e-qaatil meri dushman thi hamesha lekin
jaise ab ho gai qaatil kabhi aisi to na thi
un ki aankhun ne Khuda jaane kiya kya jaadu
ke tabiyat meri maail kabhi aisi to na thi
aks-e-ruKh-e-yaar ne kis se hai tujhe chamakaya
taab tujh mein maah-e-kaamil kabhi aisi to na thi
kya sabab tu jo bigarta hai mujh se har baar
Khu teri hur-e-shamaail kabhi aisi to na thi

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/19/2008 6:35 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

hmmm
kyun meray sabar ka itna imthian letay ho
kyun poochtay ho sawal jab haal mera jaan letay ho
kya guzarti hai mujh per sab maloom hai tum ko
kyun hoti ho khafa jab apna maan letay ho
kisi aur kay hath mein tera hath dekh nahi pata
kyun jalanay ko kisi aur ka hath tham letay ho

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/19/2008 10:29 PM
mariya, 22
mirpur
Pakistan

Wo koi aur na tha chand Khushk pattey thay
shajar se Toot ke jo Fasl-e-gul pe Roye thay
Abhi abhi tumhe'n sochaa to kuch na yaad aya
Abhi abhi to ham Ek-duusare se bichray thay
Tumarey baad chaman par jab ik nazar Dali
kali kali me Khizaa'n ke Chiraagh jalate thay
Tamam Omr vafaa ke Gunah-gaar rahe
Ye aur baat keh ham Adami to achay thay
shab-e-Khaamosh ko tanhai ne zabaa'n dey di
Pahaar Goonjtay thay, Dasht san-sanaatey thay
Wo ek baar marrey jin ko tha Hayaat se pyaar
Jo zindagi se gurezaan the roz maratey thay
Naye Khayaal ab aate hen Dhal ke zahan main
hamaare Dil main kabhi khet leh-lahaatey thay
Ye Iratiqaa kaa chalan hai keh har zamaane main
puraane log naye aadami se Darate thay
'Nadeem' jo bhii mulaaqaat thi Adhoori thi
keh ek cheharey ke peechey hazaar cheharey thay...!!!

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/21/2008 5:54 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

kisi ko dekhun to wo maho saal naa milay
kahi bikharti dhool mein sawal milain
zara see dair december dhoop mein bethay
kya pata yeah pal aglay saal na milay

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/22/2008 10:26 AM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

uss ko dil main bassa bhi na paye
or sai tera se bhola bhi na paye
woh shaaks jo ban giye tha zindagi mari
hum uss ko haalay dil souna bhi na paye
woh chala giye ye shair choor key

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/22/2008 5:30 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

jo us kay chehray pay rang haya tehar jaye
to saans waqat hawa samundar tehar jaye
wo muskuraye to hans hans paray kai mausam
wo gungunaye to bad-e-saba tehar jaye

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/24/2008 1:16 PM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

tanha
Pichlay peher ki raat thee
Tanhaayee or us ki yaad thee
Chand nay mujh say kaha kon hay?
Main nay kaha koi khaas nehe
Bola zindagee kaisi hay?
Main nay kaha koi saath nahe
Bola phir kiaa chaahtay ho?
Main nay kaha koi Aas nehe
Bola tum nay Pyaar kiaa hay?
MaIN nay kaha kuch yaad nehe
Bola Tumhaary saath bhi dhoka huwa?
Main na kaha aisi koi bat nehe
Bola phir ek baat kahoon tum say?
Main nay kaha koi Aitiraaz nehe
BOla phir tum nay bhi "PYAAR" kiaa hay
or abi wo teray saath nehe.......!

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/26/2008 7:28 AM
zara, 20
India

Dil ki dhadhkan sunaya karti ho
Kis kadar zulm dhaya karti ho,
Yeh jo tum bhool jaya karti ho,
Kiska ab haath rakh ke seene par,
Dil ki dhadhkan sunaya karti ho,
Hum jahan chaye peene jaate the,
Kya waha ab bhi aaya karti ho,
Koun hai ab ke jiske chehre par,
Apni palkon ka saaya karti ho,
Kyo mere dil mein rakh nahI deti,
Kis liye gam uthaya karti ho,
Phone par geet jo sunaati thi,
Ab wo kis ko sunaya karti ho,
Aakhiri khat mein usne likha tha,
Tum mujhe yaad aaya karte ho.

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/26/2008 7:36 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

jab bhi raat hoti hai
duniya mast soti hai
meri ghamgeen ankho mein teri tasveer hoti hai
kay duniya ghum to deti hai shareek-e-gham nahi hoti
kisi kay door janay say
Mohabbat kam nahi hoti

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Re: Re: Suno
5/22/2008 9:49 AM
Raja, 22Verified Zorpian
Rawalpindi
Pakistan

dukh

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Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/22/2008 5:56 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

nice
yeah intazar-e-qayamat bhi bara Qayamat hai
kash hum pay jo guzarni hai ek dum guzray

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Re: Suno
4/24/2008 8:31 AM
armaan, 28Verified Zorpian
Manama
Bahrain

Manse kaho tum mann ki suno tum
Manmit koi manka chuno tum
Kuch bhi kahegi duniya, duniya ki chhodo,
Palkhon me sachke jhilmil sapne buno tum…

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Re: Re: Suno
4/25/2008 4:32 PM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

very nice poetry,suraj
Yeh payar zindagi main..
Aata hay phool ban kar..
Aur jaantay hain hum bhi..
Gul kab talak khilay ga..

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Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/28/2008 6:42 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

mera WAda hai aye jana
is ada say tujhay chahun ga
kay duniya mein kahi per bhi
jab kabhi mohabbat ki bat niklay gee
tumhar zuban per mera naam aye ga

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/2/2008 1:48 PM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

nice Hassan,
woh mil jaate hain kahani ban ker,
dil main bus jaate hain nishani ban ker.
jinhay hum rkhtay hain apni ankhon main
kyon nikal jaate hain woh pani ban ker.

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/2/2008 7:04 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

kabhi chand ko mein nay chouh ker nahi dekha
us ki chandni mein kudh ko kho ker nahi dekha
yeah dekha kay kahi ban naa jaye afsana payar ka
yeah soch ker us ki simt qadam barha ker nahi dekha
bato say lagta hai kay jaisay wo bhi mujhay chahta hai
per her bat mein yeah batatay nahi dekha
wo yeah janta hai kay meri ankho mein intazar us ka
per us nay meri ankho mein kudh ko kho ker nahi dekha
ab usay bewafa kahoon ya bura kahoon usay ???
kay hum nay bhi to hal-e-dil suna ker nahi dekha :)

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/3/2008 8:27 AM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

Manoos Ajnabi Mujhy Awaaz Day Zara
Apna Hoon Ya Parya Ya Ahsas Day Zara
Mere Hathli Pay Rokay Ansoon ko Dekh
Kiun ankh se bahay ya mere Jaan Tu Zara
kiun Chaar So hai shoor ajab sa mere taraf
chekhoon ki baztghasht ko tu pehchan tu zara
dunya k samny tu ya chehra hi tha faqat
charhy k pechy qarb ko tu jaan tu zara
honay laga tha mundimil jo zakham ab mera
rasany laga hai ab phir se q jaan tu zara

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/3/2008 7:02 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

Nice
Mein jo tera her pal intazar kerta hoon
such kehta hoon tujh say mohabbat bay panah kerta hoon
Na aye ghum teri zindgi mein kabhi beshuk juda raho
teray bad teray lia khuda say mein yeah dua kerta hoon

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/4/2008 8:44 AM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

thanks:)
dil ke jzbaat ki awaz nahi hoti
iqrar main suroon ki barsat nahi hoti
nigahien byaan ker deti hain sari dastaan
mohabat lafzoon ki muhtaj nahi hoti

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/4/2008 6:24 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

nice

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/4/2008 6:45 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

Mujhay tum say mohabbat ho gaye hai
yeah duniya khoobsoorat ho gaye hai
khuda say roz mangta hoon tum ko duao mein
meri chahat hi meri ibadat ho gaye hai
tera chand chehra hai aur ankh sitare
zameen phoolo ki jannat ho gaye hai
bhut din say tumhain nahi dekha
chalay bhi aao kay muddat ho gaye hai

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
5/5/2008 3:38 PM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

thanks:)
Tamanna karte ho jin khushiyo ki,
wo khushiyan apke kadmo mein ho.
Khuda apko wo hakikat mein de,
jo socha apne sapno mein ho. .....

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Re: Suno
5/6/2008 3:53 PM
SaNaa, 18
Karachi
Pakistan

suno ik kam karo,
chand se thori mutti lo ,
phir uske do but banao,
aik tere jesa aik mere jesa,
phir un buton ko tor do,
or us mutti ko mila kr dobara do but banao,
aik tere jesa aik mere jesa,
ta k,,,,
TUJH ME KUCH KUCH ME OR MUJH ME KUCH KUCH TO REHJAE............

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Re: Re: Suno
5/6/2008 6:24 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

Nice
yeah ajeeb meri mohabbatain
koi pooch lay to mein kya kahun
usay kya bataun
yeah roz-o-shab to janam janam per moheet hai
meray zakhm zakhm dil nazar
mujhay is janam mein nahi milay
meray rut jagay meray humsafar
meray sath aaj nahi chalay

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Re: Suno
4/21/2008 6:04 PM
mariya, 22
mirpur
Pakistan

Photobucket

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Re: Re: Suno
4/21/2008 6:06 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

bus ek zara see bat thi lakin tammar umer
wo mujhay jagnay ki saza de ker so gaya

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Re: Re: Suno
4/22/2008 10:22 AM
khatija, 28
Karachi
Pakistan

wow great sister,very nice poetry,
its true,pyar ka koi naam nhi hota,ye tu ek ehsas hai jo insan ko hasas bana deta hai.

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Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/22/2008 5:32 PM
Hassan, 21
Lahore
Pakistan

mein tha hara bhara shajar koi
tera intazar mujhay jala gaya

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Suno
4/22/2008 5:35 PM
mariya, 22
mirpur
Pakistan

Barhi mehnat se meri duniya lutai hogi
Meri mohabbat ki hasti bhi mitai hogi
Aa tere pairo mein marham laga doon
Mere dil ko thokar marne mein chot to ayi hogi..

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