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Don't know what to call this song......any ideas?

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Updated by Rhian at 08/08/2006 17:08

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8/1/2006 5:39 PM
Rhian, 21
Carmarthen
United Kingdom

Here's a song I'm trying to write about a Mum who has just lost a child- Hardest thing to go through. (My big sister Lara lost her daughter nearly 3 years ago from costello syndrome- I think that's how you spell it)
Well it's a start anyway- here goes

Last night when the stars were clear,
When I felt all alone and in fear,
I felt as if you were here, with me,
Telling me to wipe away my tears,

The thought of you being here made me warm inside,
I cried, I sighed, I tried...
to move on,
The memory of you lives on, in my heart,
You will never stop being a part of me.

You were a gift from above,
You were an angel of love,
An Angel of peace,
A dove who has to be released,
from her cage, from her pain.

We all cried a tear for you
We all miss you...

Why did you have to go away?
Why couldn't you stay, here with me?


(Haven't quite perfected it yet)

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8/2/2006 11:23 PM
Brian, 18
Burnley
United Kingdom

which bit is the chorus then i might be able to name it for you ???

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8/4/2006 8:21 PM
Rhian, 21
Carmarthen
United Kingdom

oooops- good point! lol- where is the chorus? erm- i guess i could put the "why did you have to go away?" thing somewhere in the middle to make it more of a meaning....maybe? sorry bout the lack of chorus!

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8/4/2006 8:38 PM
Brian, 18
Burnley
United Kingdom

i was jus wondering which was the chorus because when i write a song i always put them name of it in the chorus... so find yourself a chorus and name it from that....

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8/4/2006 8:42 PM
Rhian, 21
Carmarthen
United Kingdom

Thanx for the tip- You probably thing I'm a total duffus now huh?

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8/4/2006 8:45 PM
Brian, 18
Burnley
United Kingdom

Nah your not a duffus... your very kool i think, you shunt call yourself over a honest mistake thing lol

good luck anyway best regards Luv from Bri xxx xxx xxx

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8/4/2006 8:49 PM
Rhian, 21
Carmarthen
United Kingdom

cheers hun xxx

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8/4/2006 8:52 PM
Brian, 18
Burnley
United Kingdom

no worries :) i was wondering if you would like to be friends i'll send you a friend request if you want :P

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8/4/2006 8:59 PM
Rhian, 21
Carmarthen
United Kingdom

yeah klkl! thought we already were....lol. Nice 2 meet u Bri xx

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8/4/2006 9:01 PM
Brian, 18
Burnley
United Kingdom

hehe i thought and when i checked i dint see you on my friend list...

and its my pleasure to meet you :)

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8/6/2006 12:09 PM
bethan, 17
United Kingdom

It is a very nice song,Rhi!!!! Love it!!!! Yes i have been on zorpia....you should it call..err...."An angel song"..hehe noo!!!Anyway itz a lovely song....bibi xxxx love from your little sis,beth

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8/6/2006 5:36 PM
Rhian, 21
Carmarthen
United Kingdom

lol- thanx hun- big sis! xxx

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8/7/2006 7:41 PM
Brian, 18
Burnley
United Kingdom

Hiya Rhi i think you should call your song... Last Tear Drone but its up to you...

mwah best regards Bri xxx xxx xxx xxx

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8/7/2006 7:44 PM
Rhian, 21
Carmarthen
United Kingdom

I Christen this song Last Tear Drone lolxxxx Cheers Bri

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8/7/2006 7:56 PM
Brian, 18
Burnley
United Kingdom

No worries Rhian your the koolest :)

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8/8/2006 5:04 PM
Rhian, 21
Carmarthen
United Kingdom

Well- i wouldn't go that far hun- but thank u xx

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8/8/2006 5:08 PM
Brian, 18
Burnley
United Kingdom

hehehe ok no worries :P

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