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when heaven's not enough

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Updated by Opio at 01/20/2007 22:45

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when heaven's not enough
8/11/2006 5:11 AM
Opio, 22
Mexico City
Mexico

when the closed eyes could see more than the simple view of the organic way...
when the heavy body could feel even more than the burning skin...
when the lost essence tooke away the pain and sorrow of thousands of nonsense words...
when that could happen...

our heaven could be just another dream...
because at this moment our heaven's not enough.

(sorry for the grammar)

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11/27/2006 9:39 PM
akash, 19
London
United Kingdom

man gd poem. my question iz wt mre u desire in heaven as u sed at this moment our heaven's not enough.
dont wry about de grammar yh.

im akash aged 17 frm india, currently livin in london.

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Re: when heaven's not enough
1/18/2007 1:19 AM
realman30, 31
Casablanca
Morocco

My Heaven

I look deep in your eyes.
I see there what I feel inside.
We share something between us,
Neither one of us can hide.

I feel your lips touch mine,
I loose all my control,
All it took was a look and a kiss,
To know you were part of my soul.

I see your hands on my skin,
I want and need you to do more,
The passionate look you give me,
Tells me heaven is in store.

I feel your need against my thigh,
I know you will fulfill every wish,.
We were made to fit together,
And all it took was a look and a kiss.

I look deep in your eyes,
And I see heaven there inside,
You make me feel so beautiful,
What I feel for you I cannot hide.



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Re: when heaven's not enough
1/20/2007 10:33 PM
Opio, 22
Mexico City
Mexico

with out words

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Re: Re: when heaven's not enough
1/20/2007 10:35 PM
realman30, 31
Casablanca
Morocco

silence

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Re: when heaven's not enough
1/20/2007 10:40 PM
Opio, 22
Mexico City
Mexico

there are thounsands of words but, can you tell me what word's THE word?

silence's the way to know each other...

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Re: Re: when heaven's not enough
1/20/2007 10:45 PM
realman30, 31
Casablanca
Morocco

really the silence's the way to know yourself before any thing take care

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